The following is an example of how we have corrected part of a Master of Education assignment written by a student from Indonesia:
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' Just like many countries around the world, Indonesia government keep trying to improve the quality education, for example, revising or developing the curriculum. So far, there has been approximately 6 education curricula introduced in all the regions of the Indonesia including one in 1994. This curriculum is still being used in Indonesia nationally but the government has been trying out the implementation of Competency Based Curriculum in some school.'
' As in many countries around the world,
the Indonesian government has been
trying to improve the quality of education.
It has done this, for example, by revising
and developing the curriculum. So
far approximately six curriculum changes have been
introduced nationally. The latest change, introduced in 1994, is still
being used throughout Indonesia.
However, the Government has implemented a
Competency Based Curriculum in some schools.'
The changes are small but the impact of the changes is great.
It is changes like these that make all the difference to the marks you receive.
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